Tuesday, 18 March 2008

It's dark tonight

It's so very dark tonight
I can’t see very far.
Look the moon is tilting back,
to catch a falling star!
Something’s flutt'ring up above
A bat as brown as mud..
Wow! Too close for comfort
I'm keeping all my blood!
Hey, look a shooting star up there
flying without sound
I wonder where it shot from
and where they hit the ground?
Can you see that moth there?
hovering by the light.
I wonder where he sleeps by day
He only flies at night.
Now come on stop that hiding,
darkness holds no fear.
Please don't try to scare me.
Ok, I'm outa here!
let me read it to you!


MsRose said...

:) You're such a wonderful writer!
Good to see you still adding here! It is blossoming:)

Take Care Keith

UL said...

i agree...this one i liked much, i read it all over even though i caught it at your other space too..

jadey said...

I love this and I know that I have commented on it before why it is not showing up I don't know but that is okay cause here is my comment again today. Love it.