Tuesday, 18 March 2008

It's dark tonight

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It's so very dark tonight
I can’t see very far.
Look the moon is tilting back,
to catch a falling star!
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Something’s flutt'ring up above
A bat as brown as mud..
Wow! Too close for comfort
I'm keeping all my blood!
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Hey, look a shooting star up there
flying without sound
I wonder where it shot from
and where they hit the ground?
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Can you see that moth there?
hovering by the light.
I wonder where he sleeps by day
He only flies at night.
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Now come on stop that hiding,
darkness holds no fear.
Please don't try to scare me.
Ok, I'm outa here!
let me read it to you!
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3 comments:

MsRose said...

:) You're such a wonderful writer!
Good to see you still adding here! It is blossoming:)

Take Care Keith
MsRose

UL said...

i agree...this one i liked much, i read it all over even though i caught it at your other space too..

jadey said...

I love this and I know that I have commented on it before why it is not showing up I don't know but that is okay cause here is my comment again today. Love it.